@ivankiss
Hey Ivan I have a question. I see you like writing songs (I saw you wrote quite a few on the actualized.org forum), and I also would want to start writing more poems/songs (without it relating to you, like I've wanted to do it before I saw you write). But something that surprises me is that your songs don't even rhyme...(at least this one), and yet.. it's quite good. While I struggle to find rhymes you are just flowing. Makes me think if a song is even good with no rhymes (let's say I want to write a song)...
I know Phil has an explanation on his website but I'd like to hear various perspectives in order to understand it better. Sometimes I wrote stuff that didn't happen (the opposite happened), and so I realized the context of the dreamboard goes beyond 'what you want'.